Robert Burns National Heritage ParkRobert Burns National Heritage Park
Robert Burns National Heritage Park Home PageThe ParkThe StoryEventsHospitalityOnline ShopAuctionHelp BNHPLatest NewsArchive NewsTeachersKids ZoneLocationContact UsVacanciesLinksRobert Burns National Heritage Park Robert Burns National Heritage Park

Archive News


Well Versed ... Poem for Ayr Winners

29-03-2002

Poem for Ayr WinnersPicture:Poetry winners and runners-up (left to right) Emma McKelvie, Lauren Howarth, Miriam Hart, Kirsten McCroskie, Kayleigh Hill, Kristofer Wright and John Rodie with North Ayr writer in residence Gerry Stewart (extreme left), Post editor Jim Robb (second left) and park director Nat Edwards. Missing form the picture is runner-up Antonia O'Hare.

Ayr's attempt to earn City status may not have succeeded - but a competition run in conjunction with the bid was a major success.

Around 300 writers sent entries for A Poem for Ayr run by the Ayrshire Post and Burns National Heritage Park.

Prizes were offered in three age groups. Primary schoolchildren clearly had great fun putting down in writing their views about the Auld Toon.

And senior students and adults made cogent points about what is wrong and right with Ayr.

The judges - South Ayrshire Provost Liz Foulkes, Burns National Heritage Park director Nat Edwards and Ayrshire Post editor Jim Robb had to deliberate long and hard before selecting these winners:

Under 10's: Kirsten McCroskie, St Johns Primary School, Ayr.
10 to 13 years: Kristofer Wright, St Patrick's Primary School, Troon.
14 and over: John Rodie, Ayr.

They each received a plaque, a certificate and Burns-related prizes. The school pupil's entries were so inventive and impressive. The primary youngsters' work was so impressive it was decided to award runner-up prizes in the youngest age groups. These went to:

Under 10: Miriam Hart, St Johns Primary School, Ayr, Antonio O'Hare, Good Shephard Primary School, Ayr.
10 to 13 years: Emma McKelvie, Heathfield Primary School, Ayr, Kayleigh Hill, Dalmilling Primary School, Ayr, Lauren Howarth, Whitletts Primary School, Ayr.

AYR

Look in the past
And what do you see?
Robert Burns and poetry.
He lived in a cottage,
He worked in the cold,
He died in his 30s
That's what is told.

We live in the present,
We support teams,
Ayr United scuffing,
Other teams!
Craig Brown lives in Ayr,
We live by the sea,
Wait! I forgot who lives here,
ME!

Think of the future,
What could there be?
Flying cars and hovering trees,
Talking posters and moving TVs,
Famous people driving
Double Decker cars,
People walking on the stars.

Kristen McCroskie (9)
P5A St John's Primary

THE CITY OF AYR

Saturday morning
Up tae high doh
Aff tae the pictures
In Ayr we go.

We havnae got the
Pictures in Troon
So we head off
To the market toon.

e havnae a cathedral
Or a university,
We havnae got an icerink
Or ponies by the sea.

Ayr has got the "Honest Men"
And the Scottish Eagles too
Ayr has got the best of shops
For our city it will do!

Kristofer Wright (10)
St Patricks, Troon

STAINS OF A CITY

Two bridges of poetic glow
Spa the streamlets as they flow
Breathtaking tales of long ago,
Of winters, tame and wild
As demands for greatness grow
Bold efforts are defiled.

To have two streams of world renown,
A stature higher than a town
But misdemeanours hold us down
And spoils our case
And visitors disgusted frown
And steps retrace

Traitors dwell within our ranks
And denigrate the Bonnie Banks
And have every effort firing blanks
When every plea is made,
Litter louts on all our flanks
Graffiti's art displayed.

Again the townsfolk raise their sights
And justly claim historic rights
To bless the town with city lights
The honest men's reward
And elevate to regal heights
With bravehearts proud accord.

Around the flame of Wallace Tower
The hero of an ancient hour
Bonnie Scotland's bravest flower
Enduring ages past,
Grant our town a city's power
Restore the greatness lost.

John Rodie, Ayr

Current News Update  17-03-2005
Future of the Burns National Heritage Park

Highland Mary Connection Made  28-02-2004
Great, great, great, great, great neice of 'Highla

First Wedding at Burns Cottage  01-01-2004
Historic Hogmanay Marriage at Burns Cottage

UN Secretary General to give Burns Lecture  25-11-2003
Kofi Annan set to give Burns speech at UN

Visiting Burns Country is easier than ever Before  06-11-2003
Ryanair survey shows impact of budget flights

Darkest Ayrshire  03-11-2003
Halloween Festival proves a success

Ghost Hunters in Alloway  03-11-2003
Ghost Vigil in Burns National Heritage Park

Cash Boost for Burns Project  21-10-2003
BNHP Leads successful Strategic Change Fund Bid

First Flight  30-06-2003
First flight for Burns Cottage Swallows

The Show must Go On!  30-06-2003
Park Friends brave rain to make film

Burns an a' That  03-05-2003
Burns festival in full swing

Burns by Diplomatic Bag  11-04-2003
Mongolian Translation received by hand of Queen's

Grant brings Glimmer of Hope  30-03-2003
Heritage Lottery Fund award grant to Museum Projec

From Russia with Luve  19-01-2003
From Melbourne to Moscow, support for Burns Cottag

Eat Haggis for Victory!  09-01-2003
Proceeds from Haggis Sales to boost Burns Coffers

Burns' Sycamore Makes Top Tree List  03-01-2003
Kirk Alloway's famous tree features in new list of

To a Well-Connected Mouse  31-12-2002
John Updike Updates Burns' Classic Ode

Historic Alloway in Miniature  23-09-2002
New model of Alloway in 1844 unveiled

Chieftain o the Puddin Race is Saved  27-08-2002
Burns National heritage Park joins forces with Sco

A Fresh Taste of Burns Country  07-08-2002
The best of Ayrshire natural cooking

Golden Jubilee Celebrations  03-06-2002
Burns Heritage Park celebrates the Queen's Jubilee

Burns Cottage Museum achieves Official Status  29-05-2002
Full Museum Registration Achieved

Burns Cottage Museum  29-04-2002
Restoration of Burns Cottage Museum.

Master Thatcher at Work  22-04-2002
A partial rethatch of Burns Cottage.

Miles The Mouse  19-04-2002
Charity event at Burns Cottage

Well Plaid, Johan!  05-04-2002
New Burns Heritage Tartan unveiled at Alloway.

Plans for Cottage Museum  05-04-2002
£2 million plus plans for Burns Cottage Museum.

Well Versed ... Poem for Ayr Winners  29-03-2002
Ayrshire Post Competition

  00-00-0000


  00-00-0000


Robert Burns National Heritage Park